Monday, April 20, 2009

Thirty two white balloons were released last Thursday to commemorate the second anniversary of the Virginia Tech shooting. While more than four thousand people participated in a three point two mile race to honor the thirty two victims, some of the victim’s families still remain skeptical of the school official’s actions the day of the shooting.

1 comment:

Sheri said...

The shooting anniversary story could be longer-- you only used 56 words. Remember to keep it in present tense. What's happening NOW? Good job of changing the post to include numbers spelled out the way an announcer would say them.